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> Into Trance, ...I keep fallin


Sidonix
post Sep 10 2005, 09:20 AM
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last night I played rain on my speakers...and fell into trance...she was there beside me...waiting...sad...misunderstood...alone with sorrow...she lets me share her sadness...she lets me dive deep inside into the abyss of her loneliness...the rain changes into waves when I hit the edges of her heart...I drowned and float up to breathe the air of her breath...I look up into her eyes and see the ocean from below...I wipe the salty tears with my lips and touch her's with my fingers...I hear her desire and hold her tight...I run my fingers through her hair...I tell her that she's safe from harm...my maddness will protect her from the insanity of daydreaming...the fullmoon shreds the night burning our naked skin...her words melt in my mouth and her questions in my mind...she struggles to break free from me...she's afraid of the answers I give her...she's afraid that she'll find out what's she's looking for...I stop the fire from my eyes and lock my mind...I hold her tight and run into the night...the sweet midnight wind caresses our skin cooling our steps...we look at timid stars fallen into the lake before us...a butterfly dances alone on a web of hungry death...she rips the death apart and takes the life in her hands...she lifts it in the air and both start to dance into the moonlight...my mind wonders if ilusions can be so beautiful...she comes to me and smiles...her skin is so bright...her eyes are so dark...she whispers...I am trance...and you are !?...into me !?...I am...into you...falling...she embraces me and we started to waltz under the moon on a slow dying rythm...and we dance into the sunrise...you can stay here with me forever...we'll feed with sadness and quench our thirst with pain...I smiled a tear...I've been here since you were not...this lake is cryied from my pain...these stars are failled answers...this moon burns light from the shadows of my mind...once I was that butterfly caught by no reason to live...and...then I forgot...until I've fallen into trance...you...again...she touches my lips...shish...now we can cry together seas of wondering eternal happiness...we can dance together on the edge of oblivion...I smiled...you can dream inside of me untill I fall into..you...trance...again...
...the first rays of the sun drys my tears as I wake up...hmm...I think tonight will rain again.

ps:...a present from me for Miss. Transe ;)
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post Sep 10 2005, 11:49 AM
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:) :) :) ...n-as fi crezut niciodata ca am sa primesc in astfel de cadou... in special pentru ca azi ar fi trebuit sa fie o zi mediocra, cu nimic deosebita de alte sambete (Never say never..).
Ar fi greu sa nu imi imaginez ceea ce ai scris tu. Poate ca eu abia acum traiesc seara care a trecut...Reusesc sa ma identific cu cea din visul tau, shi sa rostesc aceleashi cuvinte " ...I am trance...and you are !?...into me !?.." Eu sunt, tu esti...existam...noi suntem viatza, "a butterfly dances alone on a web of hungry death." Ma pierd in reverie...

PS: Nu am cuvinte in acest moment...dar sunt onorata ^ ^ ..poate chiar fericita (??)...macar temporar...
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post Sep 10 2005, 12:44 PM
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Noah LOL! Sidonix ishi arata talentele ascunse... shi o scriere poetica rau... cu dedicatziune pentru transe. So, pentru Sidonix, - really nice... pentru transe - enjoy it... :rolleyes:
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post Sep 10 2005, 05:19 PM
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Sid, cred ca ar trebui sa te gandesti la o cariera de scriitor. Pe bune.
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post Sep 17 2005, 11:33 AM
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prima si ultima continuare neterminata(este un exercitiu simplu de imaginatie) intr-una din infinitele variante posibile...

?a sad tune accompanies the mood of tonight?fall?for?my fall?for my fallin??fallin? masquerade?there is empty space?it?s my empty space?I let you dream inside and forgot to wake you?you?ve been sleeping since the moonlight was in full bloom?you my lovely trance fell deep in my fall?its spell has taken you to a bitter sweet heaven?its twilight melancholy embraces you into amnesia?I?ve been trying to bring you back for ten nightfalls?I?ve implored the black heavens to release you from its prison?I was the one who needed you?my passion enslaved the trance I fell into?I miss your velvet touch?I can only hear your raptured whispers somewhere in the seclusion of my heart?My frozen dreams can?t fly anywhere beyond the agony of reality?tonight I?ll dream with my eyes opened?I?ve taken flyight?My dark wings stains the moonlight that lights me the way to your cage?I see the door to my tangled heart?For your love I tear my self apart and enter?A crimson rain spreads a forever rainbow of life over a red dead sea?I see that the dance of its water?s reflecting a starlight from above?the echoes carries me through illusive dreams that are not mine?I am close deep inside?I move through strange clouds of lightning?and there I see you?moon of my nights?trance?s metamorphosis lost her in my self?her moonskin blinds my mind?she dresses rays of a silver star?she sits on a lightning drinking white nectar from the milky way?she startles when she sees me?my fallin? love?your dreams are so sweet?I?ve never felt like this before?I?ve bathed in your feelings?I?ve fed with your burning empty love?and now you came to fill me?she burns my fire in her nocturnal eyes?she?s hungry with the desire of my lost memories?I?ve come to take you?I?ve come to brake you?I?ve come to make you?in?to?trance? again?No?my love?I don?t want to go back to unending unfulfiled sadness?she runs and jumps into me?I catch her not to fall inside?she grabs me and steals my lips?Taste my lips filled with your love seva that I?ve drank last night?I?m lost to her aroma?I can?t fight the sugar rush?I?m dizzy with desire?I?m in a maelstrom of lust that takes me to paradise?I?m paralysed in a trance again?my twisted mind devoured her purity and thrown her in the chains of my lustfull heart?the innocence of her sadness is what I?ve fell for?I?ve taken away from her what I loved the most?I?ve taken away from me what I loved the most?she feeds with my crude flesh with savage hunger?her saliva makes me float on a spring of wonderlust?I feel her nails cutting me deep under my skin?she breathes fire in my mouth?I?m melting?she conquers me with every kiss?the dark kiss of my angel?I want to surrender?I?m subdued?I want to make her whole?to become one with my trance?I can?t?I am true?I am lie?see the pain that?s in my eye?I can fear?I can deny?all my love I will defile?I open my mind and let it loose?clouds of chaos storms on all breathing desire?I vanquish and lock her with my grip?she cries slow?no?please?I need more of your love?I let her look into my eyes?she sees the wars inside?death and life colide?entwine?all this massacre its hidden from dreams of the relinquished harmony that I held inside my broken heart?you?ve fallen in my desire and now I?ll show you?en..trance to my torment?are you ready to die tonight into my mind ??she?s shaking with fear?I?ve never died before?ha ha ha?I laugh out loud?have you ever lived before ??No?then this will be your first time for both?I am afraid?fear is just a sensation...there is something more inside...I closed her eyes into a coma...she dissapears as I unlock demented thoughts from ragin' chaos...I go down the strairs of my mind and follow her...
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post Sep 19 2005, 07:43 AM
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That is so cute!! Maybe a little spooky but still cute!! It's so... YOU. ^___^
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post Sep 19 2005, 08:55 PM
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...umm...de data asta mi se pare prea trist;Trance pur shi simplu dispare...moare (deshi nu a trait trecutul, traieste momentul vorbirii) :(
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post Sep 20 2005, 09:54 AM
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...don't be sad trance...death is a new beginning :)...din pacate nu am mai avut timp sa continui...am o carte de continuat si eventual de terminat...ar mai fi un proiect de scenariu...se pare ca muza imi surade din nou :)...
ps: tenshi...I'm no pink U know :P
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Rezo The Red Priest
post Dec 22 2005, 10:36 AM
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:D SUPERB :D

Very good english over there. Foarte sumbru, trist, alegoric, de neinteles. Dar per total e foarte bun. Nu prea ai ce intelege, doar sa simti. Creezi foarte bine mood-ul.

Mult succes in continuare. :P
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post Apr 12 2007, 04:40 PM
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e sweet .imi place. sunt de accord cu Rezo The Red Priest,,Very good english over there'' :lol: :lol: :lol:
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