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[Princess of Darkness]

Capitolul 1.

Land of Gods. It was a land beyond imagination. It was separated from Spirit World, Makai and Human World due to their nature. They couldn’t accept the war between the other worlds. Something like Switzerland: powerful and uncommitted. Even if they were all gods, they had different levels of power. They were ruled by King Kaito who had a daughter, Kanako. She was different from the other gods. Unlike them she wasn’t happy. All her life she thought of herself like a bird in a cage. Her father didn’t let her do almost anything. She had to act like a princess, thing she hated the most. Being the Goddess of Mystical Creatures, she had an untamed soul. She wanted to fight, to live adventures, to risk her life. She was lonely, her best friends were the 4 mighty creatures she could control the best: Vermilion bird(Suzaku), White Tiger(Byakko), Azure Dragon(Seyruu) and Black Tortoise(Genbu). She didn’t get along with her stepmother, although she was nice. One day, she was sitting at the window sill, thinking.
{Your pov}
It was so boring. You couldn’t wait the night to come to go train again.
“I can't understand why he persists in not letting me train. I am a Goddess, the future queen and I don't even know how to control my powers. Is he out of his mind? I can't just sit here all day long. I wish I was free!”
As you say this a light strikes from the floor and a boy about your age appears. He was gorgeus. He had blue hair and deep blue eyes. You jump from the window sill in a fighting position.
"Who are you and what do you want?" you ask him and he looks at you with an amused face.
"Hi! I'm Ferus. Nice to meet you. I'm here to tell you something very important." he says in a childish way. You could sense a great amount of power coming from him but you knew he wouldn't harm you.
"So, I see you're not here to kill me. Then what do you want?"
"I am here to tell you something about your nature. It is best if you sit down.” His face turns serious and you could tell he wasn’t joking anymore.
"No thanks. I'd rather stand."
"OK.Then, let's begin. What do you know about your biological mother?"
"Well, not much. She died when I was little and father never talks about her."
"Then, you don't know that she was an angel and that you are one too."
"A what? No! I'm only a Goddess and I think that's enough."
"Well, it's not common, but you are half Goddess and half angel."
"But if I'm half angel, how come I've never felt other powers except the usual ones?"
"That's what I'm here for. You can't use your other powers until you accept the fact that you are an angel." "Well, this should be interesting. I acc...."
"But there are some risks. If you accept to be an angel then your original powers will be restricted. If you use them after you accept being an angel you might not be able to control the amount of power from your Mystical Creatures and die. But you can choose to use one of them without risks."
"It's that all?"
"Ah...No! If you accept to be an angel, then you must become a Guardian Angel, just like the ones in the stories. Hihi!" he starts to giggle.
"So, in other words I'll be baby-sitting."
"Yeah. You are right except the fact that he's not a baby."
"He?"
"Yes. His name is Hiei Jaganshi. He has a lot of enemies and it seems that someone wants to kill him. We don't know who, so we are sending you to guard him."
{His name sounds familiar.}
"Ok. I'll do it."
"Good. I think this is all..."
"What about the animal I'm allowed to choose?"
"Oh, yes...You're right. What animal do you choose?" You sweat drop.
"Hmmm....Byakko!" "Oh...That sweet little cat of yours." And at his words a growl was heard.
"Ok. Maybe not so little."
"Ok. Anything else?"
"Yes!” His face turns serious again.
“What ever you do, do NOT fall inlove with him and your identity must be kept a secret."
"Don't worry. I don't fall inlove so easily."
"Ok. I must leave now." When he's about to leave he remembers something and turns around.
"Oh...right. I remembered. Here! Catch!" and he throws you a bracelet.
” What is this?"
"This is a bracelet which will help you control your powers. You must always wear it in order to hide your identity. Whenever you take it off, you will transform and be able to use your angel powers."
"Ok. Have you forgotten anything else?”
"Well, let me think(counting on fingers): the mother, the guardian part, the animal, the bracelet...well I think that's all."
"But wait. How can I find you?"
"Whenever you need me, just say my name.” he says while opens a portal and then disappears. You go through the portal and you end up in a forest.
"Great. I forgot to ask him how I'll find Hi...."but you were interrupted by a monster who rushed at you. Because you weren't concentrated, you get a full hit and when you were about to fight back, you hear a voice shouting "REI GUN!!!!!!...."
You turn around and see 4 boys that you recognize.
{Now I know why the name was so familiar. These are the detectives from Spirit World. Damn you Ferus. Why didn't you tell me? I might as well play the little innocent girl in order to stick around them}you think to yourself and you then realize they had already killed the demon. One of them was coming towards you.
“Excuse me. Are you ok?” He asks you. You look up into his beautiful emerald eyes and answer.
“I’m ok. Thank you!"
"Hey Kurama, who's the chick?" asks the most annoying voice you have ever heard.
"I'm sorry, I didn't catch your name."
"I didn't throw it. What is your name?"
"Well, I'm Kurama. The others are Yusuke, Kuwabara and Hiei." He says while pointing to each and one of them. “Nice to meet you. I’m Kanako and sorry if I was rude but he annoyed me."
"It's ok. We know the feeling."
"What was that Urameshi?” and they start fighting.
"Well Kanako,..."says Kurama pretending he didn't see the fight, “We would like you to come with us."
"Well, why not. Let’s go!"

http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r27/Hie..._yPictures3.jpg - This is Kanako
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r27/Hie...cy/ribonguy.jpg - And this is Ferus


Poi... Astept parerile voastre (daca exista, desigur), criticile... Si cam atat

[Miroku]

very nice story...good job :P :D :D

[Inu-Daiyokai]

Yup it's sweet keep up the good job B)

[CRISY_ANIME]

Love it! :lol: mai ales ca e vorba despre Yuyu Hakusho! :lol: astept o continuare cat mai curand :lol:

[Princess of Darkness]

Capitolul 2.

While you were heading to "who knows where”, you noticed that the boy you were supposed to guard said nothing. Meanwhile, you arrive in front of some huge doors. When they open you see a baby sitting at a huge desk signing papers.
"Kanako, I would like you to meet our boss!” says Kurama.
You look around confused and ask "Well, where is he?"
"Binky Breath here is our boss.” says Yusuke and points to the baby.
“You’re kidding, right?"
"Hello miss. I’m Koenma, the Ruler of Spirit World."
"Holly sh*t! A talking baby. You don't see this quite often."
"What are you saying? You should pay more respect to..."
"I think baby needs a nap.” At this everyone starts laughing, even Kurama, and Hiei just smirks.
“You should have told me we had guests. I’ll be right back." Koenma says and enters another room. After 5 minutes a boy about 18 comes out. “Sorry to keep you waiting."
"Where did the baby go?"
"The 'baby' is in front of you. This is my human form."
"Well, you don't look bad at all."
"Thank you. Now please, sit down. I need to ask you some questions.” he says while blushing. You sit down and wait for the interogation. "Can you tell us who are you and what kind if demon you are?"
"I can only tell that my name is Kanako. The rest I don't remember!"
"I see. I would like you to live with the gang until I do some research about your past. And they can train you, so that you'll remember your powers."
"Sounds good to me."
"Welcome to the team.” says Yusuke and you smile!
The guys take you to a big mansion and Kurama shows you the house and your room. Afer you examine it, you realize something and turn to Kurama. "I have nothing to wear except the clothes that I have on me. Where can I get new ones?"
"Well, tomorrow you'll go shopping with Botan but until then I have an idea." says Kurama with a devilish smile. "Follow me." And he takes you to a dark room. He shows you the closet and says: "Be my guest. Choose anything you want. I must go now, but I'll check on you later."
"Ok. Thanks Kurama. " While you were looking through the closet you notice all of the clothes were black. Just the way you liked them. You change and when you were about to leave you see that Hiei boy standing at the door with a killer look on his face. "Onna, take those clothes off. Now!"
"What did you say, you pervert?" And you throw at him anything that you get your hands on. Hearing the noise, the others come to see what is happening. When they were at the door Hiei was pulling your clothes and yelling:
"Take MY clothes off you bakka onna!" The others were a little shocked except Yusuke who manages to say:
"Hiei, you animal. Aren't you moving a little bit too fast?" At this Hiei glares at the others and Kurama says:
"I'm sorry Hiei, but you were the only one about her size." You notice 3 girls and ignore what ever Hiei says. You could only hear a "Hn" from his part. A girl with baby blue hair comes to you and says:
"Hi! I'm Botan. They are Keiko and Yukina." she says while pointing to the other 2 girls. Your eyes land on the girls with red eyes.
{They look like Hiei's, except the fact that they show kindness and Hiei's show...well, they show anything else but kindness.}You were interrupted from your thoughts by Botan's question. "
Are you Hiei's new girlfriend?"
"What? No! You're wrong. I just needed to borrow some clothes and Kurama showed me his room."
Kurama and Hiei were argueing, the 2 bakas were doing what they know best : fighting, the girls were 'killing' you with their questions, when you suddenly hear: "Ahem!".
Everyone stops and you hear from behind a voice even more annoying then Kuwabara's.
"Who the hell are you and what are you doing in Hiei's clothes???" You answer without even turning to see who was asking.
"I’m Kanako and I borrowed Hiei's clothes. Who is asking?"
"I'm Hiei's girlfriend!"

Sper sa va placa si astept si critici... Kisses and Buh Bye!

[CRISY_ANIME]

:lol: :lol: :lol: nu mai pot,,Binky Breath here is our boss'' :lol: :lol: :lol: dar am cateva dileme: de cand Hiei are prietena si de cand Kurama are ,,a devilish smile''? :huh: :huh: :huh: . oricum ,ai facut treba buna si iti multumesc ca ai continuat ;)

[Princess of Darkness]

CRISY_ANIME In primul rand ma bucur ca iti place ficul si ca ai dat coment... Well, ficul meu este o continuare al animeului yyh vazut din punctul meu de vedere. Despre cum s-au cunoscut Hiei si prietena lui o sa spun mai tarziu. Toate la timpul lor... Astept si alte pareri si poate chiar si critici :D

[CRISY_ANIME]

Princess of Darkness,sa stii ca eu una nu prea cred ca o sa te critic curand, poate doar mici greseli de gramatica :D :D :D
apropo,daca iti place atat de mult yyh,sa citesti si Metanoia,am pus un nou capitol :D

[Princess of Darkness]

CRISY_ANIME YYH este animeul meu preferat si am o groaza de ficuri cu Hiei :D ... Multumesc pentru comenturi. Here's the next chapter:

Capitolul 3.

"I'm Hiei's girlfriend!"
You turn around to see who said that. You see a girl making her way to Hiei. She wraps her arms around his neck and kisses him. You were so disgusted by her. Then she turns to you and says:
“I’m Kate, Hiei is MY boyfriend and I don't like you wearing his clothes!"
You hated people who talked down to you especially annoying girls, who you could have killed in a blink of an eye. But being a princess, you were used to control yourself, so you managed to stay calm.
“Don’t worry, he can have his clothes back. I can borrow from Kurama."
"Hn.You can keep them onna.I don't want them back." says Hiei and everyone is surprised by the answer. Besides being the longest sentence said by Hiei since you came, he also accepted to give you his clothes to you.
"But baby, why are you giving her your clothes when you don’t even know her? You never give me your clothes!” says Kate in an annoying voice.
"Hn!" is all Hiei says and leaves the room, followed by Kate.
“I think it's best if we leave. Kanako please go with Botan and the girls to talk about tomorrow." Kurama asks you and you nod. On the way to your room you realize that you are accompanied by the girls, except Kate of course. And you were happy she didn't come.
“So Kanako, what can you tell us about you?"
"I'm sorry Botan, but there isn't much to tell. I remember nothing about my past. All I know is my name and what Koenma said is that I'm a demon."
"Ok then, let’s talk about something else. You know what Kanako? You look good in Hiei's clothes." says Keiko. "Come on Kanako-chan, tell us! Is there something between you and Hiei?" Botan asks you with a devilish smile. "Are you out of your mind? Who could like that bad-tempered scary midget?"
"But you're the same height as I am. In other words, you’re shorter than him.” says Yukina with an innocent smile.
“Well...You have a point there Yukina. You remember me of him, but your characters are very different!"
"Well of course she reminds you of him. After all she is..." but she Botan was cut off by a knock on the door, and Kurama comes in.
“It’s late girls and Kanako needs her rest especially if she's going shopping with Botan tomorrow!"
"Hey! What do you mean by that?"
"Nothing Botan! I was just saying. And by the way Kanako, here are some clothes to sleep in." he says and gives you a shirt and a pair of blue shorts. After the girls leave, you were wondering what the connection between Hiei and Yukina was. But you were too tired to think about it, so you gave up.
The next morning
You understood why you needed rest. Shopping with Botan was hard even for a royalty who was used to buy fancy dresses and clothes. While trying to ignore the pink shops that Botan dragged you, you tried to find out more about Hiei but it was useless.
{He is a difficult boy. I’m sure he's hiding something. I don't want why. Maybe it's just my woman instinct, but I'll find out for sure.}
That night you wanted to go training like you used to, but to your surprise, you saw the boys already training. "Kanako! I didn't know you were awake. I thought that you must've been tired after a whole day shopping." "No...I'm OK!" "Then let's train!" says Yusuke.
"Awwww....It's been a while since we trained with a pretty girl." says Kuwabara with a dumb smile on his face. "Hn. Besides being a baka, you are blind too. Where do you see any pretty girls here?"
"Well, at least Kuwabara has an excuse. He is stupid and has only 2 eyes. But you have 3 eyes and you can't even see how your girlfriend looks like!"
"What did you say detective?” Just when they were about to fight, Kurama stops them:
"Come on guys! It's not the time to fight. We came here to train."{Even if Yusuke is right!}
During the training, the boys were trying to take you easy. You went through the basics of body combat although you knew them already. Unfortunately, you had to pretend like you didn’t know anything!

Hope you like it...
O sa pun o poza cu Kate mai tarziu... Kisses and Buh Bye!