Outline · [ Standard ] · Linear+ Lina's Lust For Power, Daca va placut Slayers...

[Rezo The Red Priest]

In primul rand sa stiti ca nu este chiar cine stie ce. L-am scris cam intr-o ora asa ca nu ma astept la ceva spectaculos. Celor care au vazut
seria sper ca o sa le placa si ca o sa-l inteleaga. Nu l-am scris cu multe descrieri ca nu prea imi plac. Este foarte dinamic asa ca sa nu va asteptati la o ditamai poveste. Esenta este importanta ! Oricum vreau sa stiu parearea voastra. Nici chiar pe cele mai rele. Tee-hee.
Enjoy !




- Oh! My feet hurt. Can't we just STOP. Everybody I said STOP.
- What's the matter Amelia are you tired again. Come on, the last time we stopped was about five hours ago.
- Reeeeeally miss Lina you should be more understanding!
- Understanding?! UNDERSTAND this: we have to move on and continue to search for the Claire Bible or the next time we encounter Theymos we might get our asses kicked soooo bad that you won't have to worry about walking so much ever again. I hear that you FLY in heaven !!! Got that. So let's get moving.
- Know Lina, I... I'm also kinda tired maybe we should stop.
- Not you too Gourry. Don't you understand that we HAVE to find that manuscript or I won't be able to destroy Theymos.
- Lina's right guys we should continue. We can rest once we reach the inn.
Lina and Zel continue to walk on.
- *Sigh* she really doesn't give up does she?
- No, I guess not Amelia. Hope we reach that inn fast. I'm hungry.
'Lord Theymos...After defeating Hellmaster I thought we'd be safe. After all the whole thing started from the fight betweeen Hellmaster and Gaav...I didn't think the monster race would continue to want me dead after that, but now i'm sure of it. wherever we go problems apear... Like in Kogame...The whole city was destroyed in the fight with Nightpriest. The Ragna Blade barely scratched him... We defeated him with an attack from both sides. Me with the Ragna Blade and Gourry with the Sword of Light...Darkness and Light...Death and Life...alas Nightpriest was destroyed but the power unleashed was enourmous...it reminded me of the Giga Slave. Kogame was razed...for what? What will happen next time. I'm sure Theymos isn't pleased. I have to find a new source of power. The Xan manuscript... written by the Water Dragon King himself... I'm sure that it will help us.'
- Come on guys I see the village.
- Finally!
- We can EAT.
Later at the inn...
- I'm stuffed!
- Told you not to eat that last stake, Lina.
- Shut up Gourry.
- Okay. What is the plan?
- Well Zel it's like this. We have no idea about what Theymos is going to do so I say we find the Xan manuscript as fast as we can.
- Soooo, do you know where it is.
- I once read it was in the temple high up in the montains next to this village so I guess we'll have to go on it and search for the manuscript.
- Of course we will. JUSTICE will win in the end. We set off first thing in the morning and we will find that manuscript no matter what.
- Great to see your not grumpy anymore Amelia.
- Let's get some sleep.
'The Xan manuscript. With it's knowledge i'm sure i'll be able to defeat Theymos. Still...we have to find it.'
- Good night Amelia...Amelia??? Sleeping all ready. She really must be tired.
The next day, after reaching the temple...
- Nice view from here.
- Gourry there's no time for sightseeing. Come on.
- Oh! Right.
Upon entering the temple they discover that it is deserted...
- Didn't you say the manuscript was here.
- *Kick* YOUGHURT BRAINS !!! You thought it would be waiting here so that evreybody could get it ???
- Sorry !
- Lina why is there nobody here ?
- Don't know Zel. But I fear the worst. Let's try searching for the manuscript.
- *whisper* Welcome.
- Whos said that?
- Light of life, brighter than flame. Let thy power gather in my hand!
- No need for magic dear girl i'm not hiding.
- Who are you old man ?
- I'm the guardian of this temple. I'm a servant of the Water Dragon King.
- *Gourry* Kinda like Auntie Aqua?
- That is right. Who are you now?
- I'm Lina Inverse and they are Gourry, Amelia, and Zelgadis. We seek the Xan manuscript. Lord Theymos want's me dead and I need a way to defeat him.
- I see. Better yet I foresaw that.
- Foresaw?
- Yes my dear. You see I know that Tehymos is after you.
- What?
- Yes... After what you did to Gaav and Hellmaster i'm not surprised he's after you. Killing two of the greater monsters, no other human has ever done that.
- So you say Theymos is after me for killing two of his servants?
- Two of his best.
- I understand now. Can I see the manuscript?
- Of course, considering the circumstances I will let you see it.
'The Xan manuscript...Let' see here...To use this spell...'Earthly Father'...one must posses the power of light and darkness...'all the power'...enourmous energy...'all who dare'...unleashed...'shall be no more'...must be contained...never use it for evil...'may oblivion'... the two powers...'them'. I UNDERSTAND NOW !!! LORD Theymos DOESN'T STAND A CHANCE.'
- Let's go guys I know how to defeat Theymos now.
- Congratulations Miss Lina !!!
*The earth begins to shake*
- Wha...What's happening?
- ...................
*With a large burst a monster emerged form the earth and was now floating above the temple*
- Lina Inverse. We finnaly meet.
- Kinda bored of this 'we finnaly meet' thing. I've heard it so MANY times. *Ugh*
- Your end has come.
- This one also... It's like deja-vu. Listen who are you?
- I'm Serafel and I serve lord Theymos.
- That figures.
- I won't let you leave this place. Darkness blast.
- Watch out !...
- Rah Tilt !
- Begone...
- ZELGADIS! Noooooooo...
- I'm okay.
- Amelia try to heal him!
- Gourry gimme your sword.
- Here!...
- Listen Serafle you want me so leave them alone (God that sounds like a cliche).
- Very well. Begone...
- Balus Wall !
'Let's see if I got that spell right'
- Lord of the dreams that terrify. Sword of cold and darkness, free yourself from the heaven's bonds! Become one with my power, one with my body, and let us walk the path of destruction together! Sword that can smash even the souls of the Gods! Ragna Blade!
- Light in one hand...Darkness in the other. Hope this works. Here goes nothing...
- Little pest...Megido Flame !
- Oh no you don't villain. Balus Wall. *Bang ! Zel's head smashes rock* Oops sorry for that Mr. Zelgadis I forgot about you.
- It's all right i'm fine know. Let's protect Lina.
- EARTHLY FATHER GRANT ME ALL THE POWER TAHT YOU POSSES...LET ALL WHO DARE OPOSE US BE NO MORE...MAY OBLIVION SURROUND THEM AND EMBRACE THEM...POWERS OF LIGHT, POWERS OF DARKNESS UNITE BY MY WILL AND LET NONE SURVIVE...
- Nooooo...how can this be...i'm dying...nooooooooooooo.
- Well that's the last we'll see of him.
- Hurray! Miss Lina you did it.
- Congrats to you Lina.
- Thanks everybody.
- I knew that you truly deserved to see the Xan manuscript.
- Thanks old man.
*The old man vanishes into a mist*
- Knew he wold do that. Tee-hee!
- Right, so now can we return to the village, i'm hungry !
- Gourry ! Why do you always have to be hungry?
- come on you two. Stop arguing.
'With the new spell I learnt lord Theymos doesn't stand a chance. God I feel much better now. Come to think of it i'm kinda hungry too. Well until next time...'

[Abel Nightroad]

:blink: :blink: :blink:
poate daca as fi vazut slayers ar fi avut mai mult sens ce ai scris :P

[Rezo The Red Priest]

Esenta conteaza don't think about details; oricum ajuta sa fi vazut ceva Slayers. :D

[Abel Nightroad]

am vazut Slayers ... am inteles care-i treaba cu presonajele ...
si sa stii ca nu-i rau ce-ai scris
puteai sa mai prelungesti lupta un pic ... un pic mai mult .... :) dar in rest e ok , I like it

[Vebby]

:lol: :lol: nice nice :lol: :lol:

[Rezo The Red Priest]

Multumesc, multumesc :D

Cred ca o sa urmeze lupta cu Theymos cand am timp :) Imi pare bine ca ati citit si ca ati si scris. :P

[CRISY_ANIME]

sweet, i like it! :lol: :lol: :lol:

[Rezo The Red Priest]

Rili? Dupa 2 ani ai reusit sa o mai gasesti si sa o si citesti. Ce pot sa zic decat ca sunt foarte placut impresionat si ca iti multumesc mult de tot. Daca ti-a placut inseamna ca nu te-a deranjat lipsa detaliilor :lol: asta e bine.

[mistic_angel]

Ti-am citit povestea asa cum ti-am spus.
Imi place ca este in limba engleza asa pot sa mai exersez si eu.
Imi place de asemenea ca ai creat un fic cu Slayers. Ma auz mereu de Lina si de prietenii ei, dar cand vine vorba de lucruri serioase, este serioasa.
Astept continuarea.
Bafta si succes in continuare. :)
JA NE,,,

[CRISY_ANIME]

ma bucur ca te-am impresionat placut :lol: un singur lucru mai am de spus: cand o continui? ;) eu abia astept lupta cu Theymos ;)

[Rezo The Red Priest]

Tinand cont de cererea voastra, am stat aseara vreo doua ore si am scris o continuare. Am folosit si mai multe vraji (did some research) asa ca va sfatuiesc, cand intalniti una pe care nu o stiti, sa consultati listele ca sa va faceti imaginea cum trebuie. NEAPARAT! Doar vraja finala este cea din prima parte si nu o veti gasi in liste. Asa ca puneti-va imaginatia la contributie si umpleti totul cu efecte. Sper sa picam pe aceleasi imagini. THINK BIG!!!

Lista 1
Lista 2

Enjoy!




*At the inn after a long day's walk*
- Good night everybody!
- 'Night miss Lina!
- And where do you think you're going?
- *Gourry stumbles* Well...
- Well WHAT?
- Can't I sleep in your room?
- *Bursts in laughter* Really now Gourry, you kill me! Pfffaaaaaaahaaahaaa! NO!
- Okay *sad* you didn't have to be that specific.
- GOOD NIGHT!
*Next Day*
- *Yaaaaawn; Lina wakes up* i'm hungry! Very hungry! *Dresses and goes out*
- *Knock + stomp on door* breakfast time guys!
- Morning miss Lina, we'll be right there.
- Waiteeer! Let's see here... we want everything from here to here!
- *Surprised* Oookay! Geez they'll ruin us.
*After meal*
- So I guess we're ready for this Theymos guy now that I have gained my new spell.
'Still, i'm not sure it's enough'
- *Amelia* I'm sure you'll show him, miss Lina. Justice is with you.
'Geez that's gonna be a really BIG help; sight*
- *Gourry* So, where are we going???
- ...n o i d e a! I guess he'll show up sometime. He has to be on to us since we destroyed Serafel. We have to be on our guard.
'So you do want to meet me.................'
'It's happening again; how did he manage to link himself to me? It must've been Serafel. Damned fool, he got me'
- What's that Lina?
- What's what... oh! *big smile* nothing, nothing at all.
'What if I came now? Would you be ready?'
'Now?! No! Don't! Not here!'
'Why not? I could use the fun'
- RAAAY WIING!
- Miss Lina where are you going?
- No time to talk guys! Follow me!
- *Amelia grabs Gourry and Zel* But they're sooooo heavy!!!
- Stop complaining! We don't have time!
*Loud voice from the sky*
- AND WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU'RE GOING?
- Damn it! Amelia watch out!
- With what? *cries*
- *Zel* Let me down! I'll jump if you don't!
'Where could he be? Better safe than sorry'
- *Lina* BALUS WALL!
- *Zel* Where is he? FEHL-ZA-REID!
*A spiralling ray of light, very hard to avoid*
- *Theymos* HOWL FREEZE!
- *Lina* We can't fly in this hail! Go down!
*Group*
- How did he know where we are?
- Serafel managed to create a link between me and Theymos! That's how he knew how to find us.
- So, we're in danger... right?
- Jellyfish brains! *punch* *yells* YES WE ARE! Now get up and ready the sword! BLAST ASH!
'That should cover us... I hope'
- Amelia try to dispel his shield. We must see him!
- FLOW BREAK!
*Fog dissipates*
- Nothing! Where is he?
- HA HA HA GRAY BOMB!
*Ground explodes*
- Watch out! DIEM WING! Where IS HE?!
'I hope this doesn't go bad...'
- 'Lord of the Darkness and the Four Worlds, I call upon you, grant me all the power that you possess!' And now, hope it doesn't go boom! FL-OW BREAK!
*Flicker in the sky*
- There he is!
- *Zel* Wind which blows across eternity, gather in my hands and become my strength! BRAM GUSH!
- *Amelia* Light! Gather within me and become a flash! Smash the abysmal darkness apart! ELMEKIA FLAME!
- *Lina* GA-AV FLARE!
- *Gourry* ... *stares* ... and how am I supposed to reach him???
- Hope this works!
- Arghhh! Damn you!
*Theymos's sight veil shield goes down*
- No scratch! Well at least we can see him now. Eh guys? Now you have to distract him so I can use my spell.
- NOT SO FAST! BURST RONDO!
- Balus wall!
*Lina's wall blocks the spell*
- Anaku soro'mu nazak'u sakriim...
- OH NO! Stop him now now NOW!
- CHA-...
- DRAGON
- -OTIC DISIN-
- SLAVE!
*The burst from Lina's spell hits Theymos as he was about to finish Chaotic Disintegration*
- We could've died from that! Maybe I can weaken him! RUNE BREAKER!
*Spell used by Mazenda on Lina*
- *Zel* Holy wind, wind which flows gently across the land, let all things be filled with your pure breath! VAN REHL!
*A web of ice surrounds Theymos as the guys make a run*
- How can we distract him?
- Well I DON'T KNOW! I mean it's the first time anyone tried to disintegrate me!!! We have to find a way. Zel how long can you maintain a really big Dynast Bras?
- About...
- Doesn't matter! You'll have to maintain it long enough. Amelia, Dolph Strash him and then help Gourry throw some things at him.
- *Gourry* Tomatoes?
*Lina trips*
- *Punch* NO! Attack him with you're sword. Now lets split.
*Everyone goes in another direction; Gourry with Amelia*
- I CAN STILL SEE YOU. RAZA KLOUVA!
*A blizzard of light particles sprays forth from Theymos expliding on impact*
- Light light... ummm darkness darkness. DARK CLAW!
*Same as Raza Klouva but with dark particles which in this case neutralize the light ones*
- A demon using light spells! That's a first! Okay, hope they managed to get to their places. hope...
*Meanwhile Amelia and Gourry ran towards Theymos and Zel reached higher ground*
'Zel; Hope I can maintain it'
- Supreme King with the frozen soul! Grant me the power of Icy Rage! DYNAST BRAS!
*Lightning falls around Theymos in a pentagram, and then rushes towards him. Calls on the power of Dynast Grauscherra, one of Ruby-Eye Shabranigdo's five lords*
*The force of the lightning pillars makes Theymos loose his focus*
- Damn you! RAUGNUT...
*Raugnut Rusyavuna, very ugly spell*
- Not so fast! Justice will stop you! DOLPH STRASH!
*Creates a shockwave in the shape of a spear. This spell calls upon the power of Deep Sea Dolphin, another of Ruby-Eye Shabranigdo's five lords*
*Being hit by the shockwave, Theymos can't complete the spell*
- Now it's your turn mister Gourry. What should I use? Let's star with RA TILT!
*Gourry' sword becomes a huge pillar of light energy*
- Now let's go. Diem Wing!
- Okay, they've begun. Guess it's my turn. Still... i'm not sure. Lord of the Darkness and the Four Worlds, I call upon you, grant me all the power that you possess! Darkness beyond the twilight, crimson beyond blood that flows, buried in the flow of time, is where your power grows. In thy great name I pledge myself to darkness. Let all those who stand before us be destroyed by the powers you and I posses! DRA-GON SLA-VE!
*Resisting the Dynast Bras and dodging Gourry's attack, Theymos takes a direct hit from the Dragon Slave*
- Now! LET'S GO! RAY WING!
- Now we have to meet with miss Lina and give her the sword.
- But it was so much fun attacking him with it. And besides it's mine!
- MISTER Gourry !
- I know, I know... *sad*
- Guess I held it long enough. Still she'll need more time.
*Lina and Amelia fly to each other while Zel moves in closer*
- Lord of the Darkness and the Four Worlds, I call upon you, grant me all the power that you possess! 'He'll be so pissed on me for today' Sword of cold and darkness, free yourself from the heaven's bonds! Become one with my power, one with my body, and let us walk the path of destruction together! Sword that can smash even the souls of the Gods! RAGNA BLADE! Gourry, throw the sword!
- Here you go Lina!
- EARTHLY FATHER GRANT ME ALL THE POWER THAT YOU POSSES...
'What if it's not enough? Still, i'm not sure'
*Zel aproaches the others*
- *Zel* I'm going to attack him again. Amelia you'll have to help me cast a big Zelas Brid.
- Okay mister Zelgadis.
- ...LET ALL WHO DARE OPOSE US BE NO MORE...MAY OBLIVION SURROUND THEM AND EMBRACE THEM...
- *Amelia* ZELAS...
- *Zel* BRID
*Calls on the power of Greater Beast Zelas-Metallium, one of the five lords of Ruby Eye Shabranigdo. A thin band of light, more powerul than Dynast Brass, moves in any direction the caster wills.*
- Now focus it on him!
- FOOLS! Anna-ku rahzu lamku so. Izu-pe ku naomu! FLAME BREATH!
*Theymos breaths fire towards the group*
- ...POWERS OF LIGHT, POWERS OF DARKNESS UNITE BY MY WILL AND... 'what if it's not enough? Oh no! They can't cast a shield because of the Zelas Brid. *idea* I hope I can do it!'
*Lina stops her spell*
- HOWL FREEZE!
*Theymos's fire is anihilated by the blizzard*
- Thank you miss Lina!
- *Gourry* HEEEEEEEY!!! Watch it with that thing. You almost cut me with it.
- Oh! Tee-hee, sorry.
- *Zel* Lina!? What about him? Why did you cancel your spell?
- I wasn't sure it was enough. All we threw at him, barely scratched him. I don't think it's enough.
- *Gourry* Why don't you conjure the powers of light too? Like Filia did...
- *Lina* *gasp* *sight* *amazed* *amazed even more* Run that pass me again.
- Why don...
- I heard you the first time. Yooooosshh! That's what we have to do. Now listen here...*whisper*
- *Lina* Theymos! You still here? Are you ready to be beaten?
- HA HA HA Don't talk big mortal! You know you can't defeat me!
'We'll see about that'
- 'Boy I hope he doesn't get mad for this' Lord of the Darkness and the Four Worlds, I call upon you, grant me all the power that you possess! Sword of cold and darkness, free yourself from the heaven's bonds! Become one with my power, one with my body, and let us walk the path of destruction together! Sword that can smash even the souls of the Gods! RAGNA BLADE!...
- ...if this doesn't go boom nothing will. Lord of Light, mighty Ceiphied, lend me your power to destroy this evil!
*The Sword of Ligth becomes engulfed in powerful, white flames*
- Well it didn't go boom! That's a relief.
- WHAT ARE YOU DOING HUMAN? Anaku...
- Not so fast demon. EARTHLY FATHER GRANT ME ALL THE POWER THAT YOU POSSES...LET ALL WHO DARE OPOSE US BE NO MORE...MAY OBLIVION SURROUND THEM AND EMBRACE THEM...
*As the spell is being cast, the two swords increase in power*
- ...soro'mu nazak'u sakriim. CHAOTIC DISINTEGR…
- ...POWERS OF LIGHT, POWERS OF DARKNESS UNITE BY MY WILL AND LET NONE SURVIVE...
*Lina thrusts the two swords, which now have become enormous pillars of energy, into Theymos's body*
- WHAT? HOW COULD THIS BE?
- YEEEEESS! Now I have you!
- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
- DRA-GON SL-AVE!
*Flowing through the swords, the Dragon Slave pierces through Theymos*
- NOOOOOO! HOW CAN THIS BE! A MERE HUMAN!!! NOOOO!
*Theymos is ripped apart by the energy streames*
- BEGONE DEMON!
*Theymos is finally obliterated and the swords lose their powers*
*Lina falls down, face down, tired*
- Miss Lina are you all right?
- *funny smile* OF COURSE I AM! I GOT HIM! DESTROYED! GONE! NO MORE! WWOOOSSSHHHOOOOOWWWW!!!
- Knew you could do it Lina!
- Thanks Gourry! I'm still surprised you came up with that idea! Tee-hee, I guess there is something in that head of yours besides yoghurt. I'm exhausted.
- *Zel* Yeah, me too. Didn't think I could keep a Dynast Bras up for that long.
- Nice flying Amelia!
- Thanks miss Lina! I'm glad this is over!
- Great job everybody! Now let's go find someplace where we can rest... and eat!
'Wow... Theymos... wasn't so sure I could defeat him... well that just proves what a good a sorcery genius I am. Tee-hee and a very beautiful one on top of it...'

[CRISY_ANIME]

imi place foarte mult, :lol: mersi ca ai continuat-o, e foarte interesanta si imi place ca are multe vraji :lol:
p.s.: si eu mi-am continuat povestea(Metanoia) daca vrei sa o citesti si sa lasi un mic coment, as fi foarte bucuroasa :D

[waste]

Ei bine, am inceput sa o citesc mai demult, dar acum chiar simt nevoia sa las si un comment. Imi place ca este scrisa in engleza, asa mai poate omul sa-si exerseze limba. Le-ai pastrat carecterul, personalitatea, tot!!! Parca as citi replicile adevaratilor Lina & CO... so, cand o continui? :P