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> Iubirea, Este o poezie


PurpleButterfly
post Jun 13 2008, 12:14 AM
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IUBIREA


In draoste totu-I speranta,
Dorinta si nesiguranta.
Un joc de lacrimi si cuvinte,
Dureri de vis pricinuite.

Dar poate ca mai poate fi…
Un vis… de mici copilarii
Un lant de inimi ratacite,
Minciuni si adevaruri sfinte!!!

Iubirea e un lucru sfant
Dar, ce coboara adanc
In Universul credintei,
In lumea grea… a suferintei…


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:( Sa spuneti daca va place ca sa stiu daca mai postez. :unsure: Eu as mai vrea dar dak nu va place nu am sa mai postez. :huh:
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Moonsparkle
post Jun 13 2008, 09:00 PM
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Okay then, if it stops you from posting... Nu imi place.
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Yulya
post Jul 21 2008, 09:55 AM
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Mie imi place poezia ....dar ii lipseste putzina magie :D care sa atraga cititorii ! Eu cred ca tu ai putzin praf magic ca sa adaugi si sa iasa ji mai bine ...So keep posting :)
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Shinamori
post Sep 2 2008, 11:50 AM
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Nu te lua dupa alti mey,daca tie iti place sa scri atunci scrie!!Mie mi-a palcut foarte mult poezia,te rog sa mai pui si altele daca mai ai!!
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post Sep 3 2008, 08:50 AM
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Se vede ca esti incepatoare in domeniu, tipic pentru orice incepator se concentreaza prea mult pe rima ca atunci cand pui cuvintele in propozitie, nu au nici un fel de relevanta, sunt doar cuvinte care initial ar trebuii sa sune bine dar nu au mesajul pe care vrei sa il transmiti...AS pune poezii si de ale mele dar nu imi prea place sa ma laud :P
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Shinamori
post Sep 9 2008, 07:36 PM
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Mey pentru o incepatoare..poezia e foarte draguta..dar te rog,pune si tu poezi deale tale!Ca imi place sa va citesc poeziile! :unsure:
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post Sep 10 2008, 04:31 AM
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dragut :) ; nu trebuie sa-i descurajam pe incepatori; eu de exemplu nu scriu poezii, insa incerc si eu ca vai de mine sa fac storyline pentru manga...
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